can i use "reveal" in this way?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/29 04:53:50
i m saying "your company reveals a great attraction to me" . is this explaination proper?

NO lah

you d better change your word to stirs up, gives,stimulates.

but usually we say..

I am deeply interested in your company.

Your company intrigues me a lot.

Your company has a great impact (appeal) upon (to) me..

hope you will consider my suggestion.

Yes!